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Writing Tips, Book Events, and Writers Conference

Today’s post is a mash-up of writing tips, coaching, and virtual opportunities. Bear with me, and you’ll see how it’s all related.

Writing Tips

Have you ever received a text from a family member or close friend and knew something was wrong even though the words indicated the opposite?

I’ll show you what I mean with a real-life example.

The Kid planned to drive up to deliver ducks to the couple who lives at the top of our mountain, off-the-grid in a year-round camp surrounded by tall pines, oak, birch, and maple trees. By 10 a.m. that morning, we still hadn’t heard from The Kid, which is unusual. He’s always been an early riser.

So, I shot him a text. β€œStill planning to come up today?”

Several minutes dragged by before he responded, β€œYes.”

Instantly, my intuition tapped me on the shoulder. Something’s wrong. He never responds with one word. Besides, a simple yes didn’t give me enough information. If he brought all three grandkids, I would need to plan to feed six rather than three.

Plus, I let my little spice girls (fur-babies) run around my office during the day, but our grandchildren have a habit of leaving doors open. So, when they visit, it’s safer for the Notorious P.I.G. and Miss Dee-Pac to stay in their guinea pig habitat.

I texted back, β€œThe Joe and the chicks coming, too?”

Another long pause. β€œJust The Joe.”

β€œYou okay? You sound…I dunno…off.”

By now, The Kid knows I’m tuned into him. Over the years I’ve learned to trust my intuition, and it has never failed me. Lying would be pointless.

β€œI was chasing ducks.”

β€œOkay, cool,” I texted, but something told me β€œchasing ducks” wasn’t the full story. Nonetheless, I didn’t want to push the issue, especially via text. β€œI get the feeling you won’t be staying long?”

β€œWe can stay for a bit.” The five-minute pause seemed to last twenty. β€œThe longer the better. LOL”

And there it wasβ€”the first hint of the real reason he seemed off. Which he’d spill in person. It’s much harder to hide behind a false faΓ§ade while staring into a concerned parent’s eyes. Though I would never want to come across as pushyβ€”he is an adult after allβ€”I can’t take it when my kid is hurting. I don’t care how old he is. I’ll always be fiercely protective of his beautiful heart.

I do have a point to all this.

With that one simple wordβ€”Yesβ€”I, the reader, knew to pay attention. That yes held power. That yes held unlimited power, more powerful than if he’d written an entire paragraph.

Writers should do the same. It’s a simple but effective way to add tension to a scene, cause a disturbance, and cue the reader to pay attention. The one-word, staccato sentence is a tool used for emphasis.

Run. Now.

It’s short and to the point. It calls attention to itself and exploits a reader’s emotions. Varying sentence structure holds a reader’s attention.

The following example looks like an exaggeration, but I once had to critique the first few pages of a novel written just like it.

As he stared at me, I could not look away. As I moved around the room, his stare held me hostage. As he moved closer, I told him to stop. As I backed away, he kept coming.

Rewrite:

His wolf-like stare held me hostage. Stop. Please stop. He moved closer, and I backed away. Dear God, no. Not again. My spine hit the wall, and I lowered one hand, my fingers searching behind me for the doorframe.

See how much more immediate the second example sounds? We don’t want to overdo it, but nothing can replace a well-placed staccato sentence here and there.

Writers have access to a plethora of writing tips, but it’s important not to overlook simple ways to hone our craft, like the act of reading and sentence structure.

Why am I sharing writing tips today?

Well, I’m involved in several coaching programs/events that I wanted to share with you.

Writing Tips/Coaching

On the Kill Zone I’ve been part of First Page Critiques since I joined the TKZ crew in 2017. I’ve also shared writing tips on this blog many times. But I want to focus on the critiques because they’re enormously helpful for all writers, not just newbies.

Here’s how it works.

Any writer can send in the first page of their WIP for an anonymous critique on the blog. Lynne, our in-house manager, sends all Kill Zone members the first pages without the writer’s name. By remaining anonymous, it alleviates pressure from the submitter and the one offering writing tips to improve the page.

Incidentally, when the anonymous writer submits their first page, they have no idea who’ll be critiquing their work. I suppose a writer could request one of us, but sometimes you’re better off taking your chances. We all see different things in the first pages. By requesting a certain member, you might miss out on writing tips from another member. Better to let the literary gods decide. πŸ™‚

If you’re interested, you can find the details on how to submit here.

Please note: If you’ve already published the book, it’s too late for us to critique.

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Also, I recently joined the Resident Writing Coach Program on Writers Helping Writers. If you’re unfamiliar with the coaching program, it’s founded by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi, co-authors of The Descriptive Thesaurus guides. Many well-known coaches have offered writing tips over the years and are now a Resident Coach. James Scott Bell, for example. And most, if not all, write craft books.

Needless to say, my first reaction to the invitation was: Me? Until I read this paragraph…

I enjoy your posts and because of your chosen genre, I think you have a lot to add to the conversation about writing suspense and the darker side of fiction. It’s such a balancing act to get all the elements to line up – pacing, plotting, tension, symbolism, etc.β€”and every writer needs to know how to create reader pull through tension and suspense no matter what genre they write in.

How could I say no?

Look for my first article on October 26, 2021.

Writers’ Conference

In November, I’ll be a panelist at the 2021 New England Crime Bake, which I’m super excited about. If you’re interested in attending the writers’ conference, the above link will take you to the summary and registration. My panel is β€œTrue Crime: Media Darlings” on Saturday, November 13, at 10:30-11:45 a.m., followed by a book signing hosted by Baywater Books. The bookstore will carry my last two releases, I AM MAYHEM and PRETTY EVIL NEW ENGLAND. Can’t wait!

Virtual Serial Killer Course

Here’s another cool opportunity that came my way. In mid-February, I’ll be teaching a 5-week course for the 2022 Spring semester at Foothills Adult & Continuing Education in Connecticut via Zoom.

The virtual course β€œSerial Killers of New England” will cover the following topics: FBI definition of serial killers, modus operandi vs. signature, seven key phases to the ritual of serial killing, serial killer categories, classifications, mobility, and motive (as a classification), male vs. female serial killers, types of male and female serial killers, and sociopath vs. psychopath, nature vs. nurture.

Although the school asked that I center the course around serialists of New England, the same principles apply to all serial killers.

Sounds fun, right?

Register HERE. Cost: $75 for full 5-week course.

Book Events

Last February kicked off a boom of virtual book signings, and they’re a blast. I only have one more in-person event this year, but plenty of virtual events for the fall.

All are hosted by Connecticut libraries, but anybody can attend via Zoom.

Host: Danbury Public Library

Date: September 23, 2021Β  Rescheduled for October 21, 2021

Time: 6:30 p.m.

Where: The comfort of home via Zoom.

Registration req’d for online security. Attendees will receive Zoom link via email.

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Host: Southington Library & Museum

Date: October 12, 2021

Time: 6:30 p.m.

Where: The comfort of home via Zoom.

Registration req’d for online security. Attendees will receive Zoom link via email.

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Host: Killingly Public Library

Date: Tuesday, October 19, 2021

Time: 7 p.m. EST

Where: The comfort of home.

Registration req’d for online security. Attendees will receive Zoom link via email.

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Host: Danbury (CT) Library

Date: Thursday, October 21, 2021

Time: 6 p.m.

Where: The comfort of home via Zoom.

Registration req’d for online security. Attendees will receive Zoom link via email.

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Host: Simsbury (CT) Library

Date: Monday, November 1, 2021

Time: 7 p.m.

Where: The comfort of home via Zoom.

Registration req’d for online security. Attendees will receive Zoom link via email.

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Podcast

Lastly, Garry Rodgers and I have been tossing around podcast ideas for well over a year now, and we’re finally ready to pull the trigger. The plan is to debut PostMortem Pod: Two Crime Writers Dissect Famous Murder Cases in late fall 2021. Watch this space for more info.

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It’ll be an exciting (but busy) fall and winter. Do any of these programs/events tickle your fancy? Most are free, except the serial killer course and writers’ conference, yet all promise a good time. Hope you’ll consider joining me!

Sue Coletta is an award-winning crime writer and an active member of Mystery Writers of America, Sisters in Crime, and International Thriller Writers. Feedspot and Expertido.org named her Murder Blog as β€œBest 100 Crime Blogs on the Net.” She also blogs on the Kill Zone (Writer's Digest "101 Best Websites for Writers"), Writers Helping Writers, and StoryEmpire. Sue lives with her husband in the Lakes Region of New Hampshire. Her backlist includes psychological thrillers, the Mayhem Series (books 1-3) and Grafton County Series, and true crime/narrative nonfiction. Now, she exclusively writes eco-thrillers, Mayhem Series (books 4-8 and continuing). Sue's appeared on the Emmy award-winning true crime series, Storm of Suspicion, and three episodes of A Time to Kill on Investigation Discovery. When she's not writing, she loves spending time with her murder of crows, who live free but come when called by name. And nature feeds her soul.

11 Comments

  • Sue Coletta

    Please note: I’ve received several emails about the serial killer course. I’m thrilled you guys are interested and I can’t wait to finally put a face to the name. The school is still scheduling their spring semester, so the link won’t lead to the course yet. Sorry! I’ll post a note when it’s live. Thanks so much for your interest!

  • Mae Clair

    Oh my word, Sue! How do you possibly do it all? You are an Energizer Bunny!! My head is spinning reading all you have going on. Congrats on everything you’re tackling. Wishing you only the very best!

    • Sue Coletta

      Right? I work better under pressure. When I’ve got too much time on my hands, I accomplish far less.

    • Sue Coletta

      Sorry about that, Garry. The Kid is fine now, thanks. I can’t share the rest of the story. He’d kill me if I aired his personal business in public.

      Right? Crazy busy, but all fun stuff in between writing two books, one thriller, one nonfiction. Wish me luck! πŸ˜€

    • Sue Coletta

      I do! Crazy busy, but all fun stuff. Thanks, Priscilla!

      Agreed. Few things are as powerful as a one-word response. It’s what the speaker doesn’t say that draws in the reader.

  • Margot Kinberg

    I hope your Kid is OK, Sue. I know just what you mean about knowing something is wrong, and wanting to do something – anything – to help. You make a strong point, too, about using language to alert the reader. Sometimes, the smallest changes in the way we express something can ramp up the tension in a story in a really productive way that will keep the reader wanting more.

    And I’m absolutely delighted you’re involved in so many different projects to share your knowledge. Your students and attendees, etc., will benefit immensely!

    • Sue Coletta

      Thank you, Margot! I could not have developed the course without your stellar advice, and a bit of hand-holding in the classroom arena. πŸ˜‰ It’ll be an exciting fall, winter, and spring. That’s for sure.

      The Kid is fine, thanks. A little family drama is all. Y’know, life. πŸ˜€