Betrayed – #FlashFiction


You can read this flash fiction story in One Hundred Voices anthology. Sorry, I can’t have it in the public domain. I sold the rights to Allegiant Publishing/Centum Press.


Thank you for your interest in my work. If you do read Betrayed in One Hundred Voices, feel free to leave me a comment and tell me what you think.

~ Sue



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About Sue Coletta

Member of Mystery Writers of America, Sisters in Crime, and International Thriller Writers, Sue Coletta is the bestselling, award-winning author of psychological thrillers and mysteries. OOTG Flash Fiction Offensive magazine published her flash fiction and her short stories are published in numerous anthologies and collections. InSinC Quarterly featured her forensic articles about Radiocarbon Dating and Skeletal Differences. In 2017, Feedspot awarded her Murder Blog as one of the Top 50 Crime Blogs on the net. Sue's also the communications manager for Forensic Science and the Serial Killer Project. As a way to help fellow crime writers, Sue created a team of crime experts (detectives, coroners, police captains, etc.) and founded #ACrimeChat on Twitter. She's also a proud member of the Kill Zone, where she blogs every other Monday.


  1. The Mistress of Macabre strikes again!
    Your hypnotic appeal, the superb way you write, the ease with which you draw the reader into the story, it is all so hugely enjoyable….I love the way you lure us up blind alleys of expectation, love the way you lure us to assume the obvious and then bludgeon us with more twists and turns than a rampant corkscrew….totally spellbinding tale, brilliant thoughout with a knockout ending……loved it!!!

  2. How very interesting and heart breaking to read this from the point of view of the victim, and your finale was quite surprising.

  3. I feel it was me descending slowly in the murky waters. Slow, aware of my sorroundings, in love & in shock.

    And that SOB, tending the corps as a garden. But, I will prevail.

    Great, as always, Ms. Sue

  4. Well played, Sue! Well played 😀

  5. Oooh, so well done! I was scratching my head at the prison bars part, wondering what you were up to, and then that ending…nice payoff and nicely executed!

    I’m currently in Sue Coletta mode having finished WINGS OF MAYHEM last night. I still have Shawnee voice in my head. How long do I have to wait for book two? Mayhem was so good!!!

    I posted a review to Amazon early but it still hasn’t shown up *grumble* I did post to Goodreads too, so you can find it there. I’ll give Amazon two days to post and then I’ll try again. You know how they are *grumble, grumble*
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  6. I got some really cool visuals from this one. The ending makes me think you need a puppy even more.

  7. Great description and so emotional. And that twist was so clever, and craftily set up. Had me going off on all the wrong tangents.
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  8. Great flash fiction, Sue. Outstanding description. It was an unbelievable twist at the end. So well written. —- Suzanne

  9. Entertaining and full of twists well crafted. Now, lets hunt the hunter!

  10. Wow, I was worried for a while there, but should have known you would have a great twist! Each time, I don’t see it coming. Excellent! Will continue to sing your praises, Sue.

  11. Awesome story, Sue! Excellent twist ending! So glad she got away. Thank you for sharing!
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  12. Sue, that was amazing. You’re so good at the twisty flash fiction story. I was hooked. Just thought the dying woman would expire with one last inhalation. The twist was beautiful, and unexpected.

  13. Again, Sue, I did not that coming! You are one wickedly talented writer! Excellent piece 🙂

  14. Awesome twist!!
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  15. Sue, I was hooked from the first sentence. Such imagery and the twist at the end- superb.
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  16. Flash fiction is my favorite and yours held me to the very end. Thanks for the ride.

  17. Oh, Sue, that is a powerful story! I love the perspective you take, and the twist at the end. What a unique look at a killer, too! Chilling!

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